Tuesday, 5 November 2019

Trip to Fiji with Allie

                                                                                  We have been learning how to make a postcard and insert photos.My learning shows we have put photos of me and my friend Allie onto a fiji beach.I enjoyed making the photos and putting them on.I found challenging knowing what to write.Next time I might do more writing.   

1 comment:

  1. hello it is Isla
    i am loving your work it is flowing and has good description you are right you could do a bit more writing and the paragraph at the bottom is a bit small and hard to read but it is good.

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